Feedback on my trailer drafts

After presenting my trailer drafts to the class, I asked for some feedback sheets. These are some of the responses I got: 

What I should keep:	What I should improve:
“the genre is really well presented”	“does not yet have a clear house style”
“Font/title, tree shots, costume aspects worked well”	“lack of action involved”
“camera angles, good ideas, logo, trees aspects worked well”	“Some panning is a bit fast “
“Costume is good”	“Make sure music flows with footage”
“The Fonts are really good”	“Some of the panoramic shots are not smooth, redo the panoramic shots”
“I liked the shot of the woods”	“Rushed panning”
“Better ending (in the Theatrical)”	“needs close up of face at the end”
“very good music”	“Make the contrast and saturation slightly darker, would look very good”
“I like the dragon scene effects”	“Slow down a few shots”
“Liked the genre, title(typography) and clips of woods”	“Make title at end longer”
“Loved the Dragon!”	“Have a bit more action”
“Costume & panning aspects worked well”	“Try and have a look at contrast”
“Liked the costumes & Fonts”	“Shorten blackouts and slow down filming”
“Shot of Ollie (actor for Malus)”	“Fast panning over trees”
“Love the dragon”	“No narrative so far”
“Music is great”	“Needs voiceover”
“Costumes & font titling aspects worked well”	“Leave out the really long black pauses, they took a very long time and were very frequent”
“Great shot of main character in the sun”	“Correct colour balance”
“Fantasy and historical genre are clear”	“Maybe some more action scenes, as there isn’t much to it”
“Title suits the genre alongside the setting and costume”	“Panning shot of trees is confusing, random, too fast and out of focus”
“Good lighting of introduction to antagonist”	“Have it in a letter-box”
“I like the dragon”	“Have a colour palette”
“I Like the title”	“Have some quick shots to show more interesting stuff”
“I like the Symbolic code”	“The voice of the man too loud"
“Costume and fonts give the symbolic codes”	“Not finished, too many cuts”
“Shot of trees from below and costume were nice”	“Add the music and change the fast panning shot”
“Good dragon”	“more mid-shots showing protagonists”
“I like the logo”	“Needs sound”
“Good costume”	“Too bright”
“I like the dragon shot”	“Transition to long”
“I like the font of the title- Typography”	“Black screens too long”
“Dragon added to the last scene”	“the scene where Annie (actress for Juniper) holds up the key- Lower angle”
“Costuming”	“Too many tree shots”
“Costumes great!”	“Too much fast panning”
“Dragon!”	“Be careful with focus”